sentence boundaries
Split a fused sentence when readability actually breaks
Focused turns a fused run-on into a readable beat without rewriting the scene image.
Makes the mode difference obvious: Gentle shows restraint, Focused fixes the broken boundary.
Original
The hallway smelled like bleach and old rain she kept walking because if she stopped she knew she would turn back.
Gentle
The hallway smelled like bleach and old rain she kept walking because if she stopped she knew she would turn back.
Focused
The hallway smelled like bleach and old rain s. She kept walking because if she stopped, she knew she would turn back.
Original
The hallway smelled like bleach and old rain she kept walking because if she stopped she knew she would turn back.
Gentle
The hallway smelled like bleach and old rain she kept walking because if she stopped she knew she would turn back.
What changed
- Gentle leaves the line alone because the safe correction is not purely local.
- Focused inserts the sentence boundary and one clarifying comma so the paragraph becomes readable.
What stayed intact
- Keeps the bleak hallway image and the forward motion of the scene.
- Does not replace the sentence with smoother, more generic narration.