dialogue punctuation
Fix broken dialogue punctuation without flattening the line
Focused repairs the spoken-line mechanics while keeping the threat and cadence intact.
Shows why a deeper paid mode earns its keep: the line becomes mechanically correct without sounding rewritten.
Original
"You dont know what youre saying" Lena said, "and if you did you wouldnt say it here."
Gentle
"You don't know what youre saying" Lena said, "and if you did you wouldn't say it here."
Focused
"You don't know what you're saying," Lena said, "and if you did you wouldn't say it here."
Original
"You dont know what youre saying" Lena said, "and if you did you wouldnt say it here."
Gentle
"You don't know what youre saying" Lena said, "and if you did you wouldn't say it here."
What changed
- Gentle restores the obvious apostrophes and stops there.
- Focused fixes the dialogue comma and the remaining contraction so the line reads as clean fiction dialogue.
What stayed intact
- Keeps Lena sounding sharp instead of smoothing the line into neutral prose.
- Leaves the sentence order and emotional pressure intact.

